Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.
Before the advancement of technology
people
used to utilize Use synonyms
bicycles
to travel from one place to Use synonyms
other
. These days many Correct quantifier usage
another
people
Use synonyms
using
other transport methods as compared to Wrong verb form
use
Use synonyms
bicycle
and the population can be encouraged to Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
use
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bicycle
to commute Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
at
their Change preposition
to
work places
and perform other tasks. Correct your spelling
workplaces
This
essay will outline two causes and how Linking Words
people
can be motivated to Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
bicycles
and Use synonyms
at
Change preposition
apply
last
I will provide my experience.
Linking Words
Firstly
, there are many reasons why Linking Words
people
do not Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
bicycles
. The main important reason is Use synonyms
work places
and markets are far from their houses and it becomes hard to reach their destinations on time. Correct your spelling
workplaces
For example
, Linking Words
people
in Sydney work in the cities and Use synonyms
commutes
Correct subject-verb agreement
commute
from
long distances and it becomes Change preposition
apply
for
them to Correct word choice
difficult for
use
Use synonyms
bicycles
. Another reason is that Separate Use synonyms
bicycle
paths and no reserved space in public transport Use synonyms
such
as trains and Linking Words
people
cannot carry with them Use synonyms
bicycles
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
dud
to Correct your spelling
due
less
cycle paths they Change the quantifier
fewer
use
Use synonyms
same
road Change the article
the same
with
other motors and Change preposition
as
it
increases more chances to met with accidents.
Certainly, there are some options the Authorities can Correct pronoun usage
which
use
to encourage the cyclists. The primary factor is the Government must provide employment in local areas, so workers get jobs and ride Use synonyms
bicycles
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the Council must impose heavy parking rates for vehicles, so Linking Words
people
will start using Use synonyms
bicycles
. Use synonyms
For instance
, in Linking Words
downtown
many Add a comma
downtown,
people
Use synonyms
use
Use synonyms
bicycles
Use synonyms
instead
of private vehicles, which help to control the pollution.
My experience, I used to Linking Words
use
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bicycle
when I was studying in school for less distance after I completed school Add an article
a bicycle
joined
college Correct word choice
and joined
and
it was Correct word choice
apply
long
distance from my home so I started using Add an article
a long
public
transport system.
In conclusion, following the analysis of Add an article
the public
causes
and how we can encourage the Correct article usage
the causes
people
, Use synonyms
it is clear that
the State must provide Linking Words
Use synonyms
bicycles
paths and jobs in local areas and impose heavy parking charges, so the population can consider using Change the noun form
bicycle
bicycles
.Use synonyms
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