The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart displays the amount of changes in the price of copper,
nickel
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and
zinc
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over the period of one year. At the beginning of the year,
zinc
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had the lowest value of change in price at 1%.
On the other hand
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,
nickel
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with a percentage of 6, obtained the highest level among the three metals.
However
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,
at the end
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of the year, it was completely the opposite.
Zinc
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had a slight increase to 2%
while
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,
nickel
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fell dramatically by 5%. During these 12 months, the percentage of change in price for copper almost remained at the same level. Start and end by 2%, with slight fluctuation between April and November. Despite the others, that had significant fluctuation. Specially
nickel
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rose to a peak of 6% in January,
then
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decreased to -3% in June. The most amount of drop for all of the metals was in June. After that, they increased in July and
then
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stayed the same until September. After October
zinc
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and
nickel
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overtook sharply,
in contrast
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to copper. Which didn’t have a significant increase until December.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nickel, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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