In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In a public-funded healthcare system, people want to cut in line for faster

treatment

because they are willing to pay

money

, I completely disagree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, public-funded hospitals are funded by the government and

hence

, are equal for anyone.

While

I agree that public-funded hospitals have low budgets and could use some

money

, I do not think that people should be allowed to pay

money

and get fast

treatment

as it would be discriminating against the poor who

also

deserve fair and equal rights to live.

Furthermore

, one who is willing to pay

money

for faster

treatment

should reflect on the moral implications of prioritizing wealthier patients over others in dire need.

Lastly

, Public-funded hospitals provide better and cheaper treatments and are both accessible and affordable

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the needy, buying

you

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way to cut in line would encourage more people to do the same and

hence

,

lesser

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attention will go to the needy, who actually need it. Living in a democratic country means that everyone has the same rights, paying your way to cut in line would be a violation of these rights and can cost a life.

Moreover

, paying to get better and faster

treatment

would

also

widen the quality gap between those who have

money

and those who do not.

To conclude

, I