The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram gives information about the recycling process of
aluminum
Change the spelling
aluminium
cans
.
Overall
, there are 5 main stages in the process of recycling aluminium cans
, beginning with collection and ending with new recycled items.
In the first stage, the garbage truck collects used cans
from many recycling bins. Next,
they are transported to the recycling factory where they are cleaned of dirtor
contaminated Correct your spelling
dirt or
dirt
director
substance
. Fix the agreement mistake
substances
Then
, the cans
are sorted, shredded and compressed into many small species. In the third step, can species are heated at high temperatures and then
melted into liquid aluminum
.
After that, melted Change the spelling
aluminium
aluminum
Change the spelling
aluminium
are
rolled into a thin sheet, depending on their later uses, their thickness Change the verb form
is
are
between 2.5mm to 6mm. Change the verb form
is
Subsequently
, they are recycled into new aliminum
products Correct your spelling
aluminium
such
as cans
. In the final stage, the cans
are ready for sale and consumption. Notably, in the UK, the percentage of recycled cans
makes up for
74%.Change preposition
apply
Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words cans with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼