People have different views about the choices of several
companies
to advertise their
products
by sponsoring
sports
events. In my opinion,
companies
should promote their service
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other ways or at other events.
On the one hand, there are two points
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support
this
essay.
First,
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teams and
players
are given free equipment which they could not afford
otherwise
. It helps to encourage the player to focus on their
sports
instead
of being distracted by financial worries.
As a result
,
players
will
any facilities to improve their skill and potential in
sports
that increase their chances of winning the game.
Second,
companies
can showcase their
products
on donation equipment. That
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brand awareness of
products
with
sports
fans and make them think positively with a company and have demand to buy
products
.
As a result
,
sportChange the noun form
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players
have potential in their
sports
and
sports
sponsorship provides increased media exposure for a company and its brand.
On the other hand
, some people argue the reason above because
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are worried about
product
categories which
companies
sponsoring
maybeCorrect your spelling
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harmful to health.
For example
, tobacco and liqueur
companies
their
product
are unhealthy and have any
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health.
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teams should not be allowed to sponsor
sports
events
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protect player’s health.
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the part of
they
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about company’s reputation because it
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tightly linked to a player’s reputation. If the player is unsuccessful, or
misbehaveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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it might affect
product
sales.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that
companies
should advertise their
product
in other ways
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than promote by
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. So, it will protect
companies
and
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players
from
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risk of
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products
and player’s
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.