the graph below shows information the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating
The line graph illustrates data from the years
of
1975 to 2000 regarding the types of fast food meals that teens in Australia Change preposition
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prefered
eating.
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preferred
Overall
, pizza and humbergures consumption sinificantly
increased overime. The consumption Correct your spelling
significantly
fish
and chips Change preposition
of fish
however
, showed a dramatic Add the comma(s)
, however
decreased
over the given period.
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decrease
The fish
and chips Correct article usage
Fish
was
the highest meal consumed in the country Correct subject-verb agreement
were
during
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from
the
1975 to 1985Change the article
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,
and had reached its picked Remove the comma
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at
1975 with 100 meal Change preposition
in
order
. Fix the agreement mistake
orders
The
following five Change preposition
In the
yeasrs
the Correct your spelling
years
order
of this
dish began to slighly decrease, and next five years the consumption of this
meal rosed a little with meal
eaten during Fix the agreement mistake
meals
this
10 Correct determiner usage
these
year
estimated to be between 82 to 90. Fix the agreement mistake
years
However
, the order
of this
meal is dramaticly
decrease to be the Correct your spelling
dramatically
least
meal Correct your spelling
last
order
with less than 40 orders during the year of
2000.
The pizzaChange preposition
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,
was the lowest meal consumed among the three during Remove the comma
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the
1975 with nearly 5 orders. The ordering of Change the article
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this
meal significanly
changed to reach about 82 orders in 1995 and stayed the same until 2000. Correct your spelling
significantly
While
,
the Remove the comma
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hamburger
humburger
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humburger has
been
the second lowest Wrong verb form
was
order
in 1975, it becomed
the most Correct your spelling
became
orderd
meal during 1995 and 2000 to Correct your spelling
ordered
reached
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reach
a
100 Correct article usage
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order
a year.Fix the agreement mistake
orders
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words order with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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