The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram displays the

process

of making

sugar

from

sugar

cane

in factories.

Overall

, it is a man-made

process

with 7 stages. Starting with implanting the

sugar

cane

until the

last

phase, which is drying and cooling the

sugar

. Looking at the information in more detail. At the beginning of the

process

,

it

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will start with planting the

sugar

cane

and

wait

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waiting

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for 12–18 months till it grows

up

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.

Then

the harvest begins;

this

phase could be done by a worker or certain machinery. After that, the

sugar

cane

plant will be put in a crushing machine to come out as a juice. Following that

process

, the juice will

be purify

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be purified

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in filtere. The next step

,

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is boiling the juice to become

syrub

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syrup

.

Then

separate the

sugar

from the

syrub

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syrup

scrub

by centrifuge.

Finally

, the

last

stage is letting the

sugar

cool down and dry.

Therefore

, the

sugar

will be ready.