The diagrams below show the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram displays the

process

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of making

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane

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in factories.

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, it is a man-made

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with 7 stages. Starting with implanting the

sugar

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cane

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until the

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phase, which is drying and cooling the

sugar

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. Looking at the information in more detail. At the beginning of the

process

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,

it

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will start with planting the

sugar

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cane

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and

wait

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for 12–18 months till it grows

up

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.

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the harvest begins;

this

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phase could be done by a worker or certain machinery. After that, the

sugar

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cane

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plant will be put in a crushing machine to come out as a juice. Following that

process

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, the juice will

be purify

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be purified

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in filtere. The next step

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is boiling the juice to become

syrub

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syrup

.

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separate the

sugar

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from the

syrub

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syrup

scrub

by centrifuge.

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, the

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stage is letting the

sugar

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cool down and dry.

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, the

sugar

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will be ready.