The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the
amount
of citizens living in Change the quantifier
number
cities
in four areas in Asian
over 50 years from 1970 and gives predictions for Correct your spelling
Asia
next
period in 2030 and 2040.
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the next
Overall
, it is clear that
there was an upward trend in the percentage of the population living in urban areas of four countries. Additionally
, Malaysia experienced a significant urbanization.
Looking at the chart, in 1970 there was 13% Indonesian
living in Change preposition
of Indonesian
cities
. This
figure quickly increase
to under 30% in 2000 and dramatically rose to over Wrong verb form
increased
a
half of Correct article usage
apply
overall
population in 2020. The urbanization speed in Correct article usage
the overall
this
area was predicted growing up
remarkably in Verb problem
to grow
Correct article usage
a 20-years
20-years
period Correct your spelling
20-year
then
, stood at about 60% Correct word choice
and then
people
in Change preposition
of people
cities
. This
figure in Thailand witnessed a slight increase. Stood at 19% people in 1970, the amount of Thai's
Change noun form
Thai
citizen
in Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
cities
rose gradually in these
next years. And Correct determiner usage
the
then
, some believe that this
figure could climb to roughly 50% in 2040.
Regarding Philipines
, over 30% Correct article usage
the Philipines
Philipino
lived in Replace the word
of the population
cities
in 1970. This
number had a fluctuation over 30-year
period , from 32% people in 1980 to 45% ones in 2010. It was predicted Add an article
a 30-year
increase
steadily and peaked under 60% in 2040. Fix the infinitive
to increase
While
,
Malaysia showed a huge growth in the population. From 30% Remove the comma
apply
Malaysian
living in Change preposition
of Malaysian
cities
, this
number increased countinously
to 75% in 2020 and Correct your spelling
continuously
climb
up to 83% in 2040 by prediction.Wrong verb form
climbed
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