The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart compares the

amount

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number

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of citizens living in

cities

in four areas in

Asian

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Asia

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over 50 years from 1970 and gives predictions for

next

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the next

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period in 2030 and 2040.

Overall

,

it is clear that

there was an upward trend in the percentage of the population living in urban areas of four countries.

Additionally

, Malaysia experienced a significant urbanization. Looking at the chart, in 1970 there was 13%

Indonesian

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of Indonesian

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living in

cities

.

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figure quickly

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to under 30% in 2000 and dramatically rose to over

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half of

overall

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the overall

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population in 2020. The urbanization speed in

this

area was predicted

growing up

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remarkably in

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a 20-years

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20-years

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20-year

period

then

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, stood at about 60%

people

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of people

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in

cities

.

This

figure in Thailand witnessed a slight increase. Stood at 19% people in 1970, the amount of

Thai's

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Thai

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citizen

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citizens

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in

cities

rose gradually in

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next years. And

then

, some believe that

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figure could climb to roughly 50% in 2040. Regarding

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, over 30%

Philipino

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of the population

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lived in

cities

in 1970.

This

number had a fluctuation over

30-year

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a 30-year

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period , from 32% people in 1980 to 45% ones in 2010. It was predicted

increase

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to increase

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steadily and peaked under 60% in 2040.

While

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Malaysia showed a huge growth in the population. From 30%

Malaysian

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of Malaysian

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living in

cities

,

this

number increased

countinously

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continuously

to 75% in 2020 and

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climbed

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up to 83% in 2040 by prediction.