The diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below diagram
show
the difference Change the verb form
shows
of
public Change preposition
between
library before
20 years Replace the word
libraries
before
and now how Rephrase
ago
was
the display of Verb problem
apply
library
nowadays.The main thing difference recently is computer
Add an article
a computer
the computer
room
,cafe,lecture room
,storytelling
events.
First of Correct word choice
and storytelling
all
if we look at the chart before twenty years Add a comma
all,
library
have
4 rooms and 1 hall.Fisrt Wrong verb form
had
room
includes cds
,videos,Correct your spelling
CDs
computer
games at the top of adult fiction books Correct word choice
and computer
with
Change preposition
apply
in
the right side Change preposition
On
also
have
a Verb problem
apply
room
for a
children's books near Correct article usage
apply
to
adult non-fiction books. At the Change preposition
apply
center
portion of the Change the spelling
centre
library
there as
a 2 Change preposition
apply
table
and 16 chairs near Fix the agreement mistake
tables
to
the entrance. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, in
the right side of the entrance there Change preposition
on
as
Correct your spelling
is
a
enquiry desk Change the article
an
room
and with
the left side there Change preposition
on
as
a reading Correct your spelling
is
room
.
But nowadays, there are many changes in central
Add an article
the central
a central
library
but the main is the indication of rooms
setting changes like the Fix the agreement mistake
room
installat
computers in the replacement of reading rooms Correct your spelling
installed
also
Correct word choice
and also
make
a tea Wrong verb form
making
room
for the people in the area of enquiry
desk. Correct article usage
the enquiry
Moreover
, the
Correct your spelling
they
remove
the chairs and tables from the centre of Wrong verb form
removed
library
. Everything in the Add an article
the library
library
change
without entrance Correct subject-verb agreement
changes
are
the same in both.
In conclusion, recently Verb problem
and is
a
big changes came in the Correct article usage
apply
library
from the past like computer
Correct article usage
a computer
room
, cafe, lecture room
also
a tables and chair setting area.Submitted by khastafojiii on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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