The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting tha main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The below diagram shows the difference between public libraries 20 years ago and now how
the
display of Correct your spelling
they
library
nowadays.The main thing difference recently is the computer room
,cafe,lecture room
,and storytelling events.
First of all, if we look at the chart before
twenty years Correct word choice
apply
library
had 4 rooms and 1 hall.Fisrt
Correct your spelling
First
room
includes CDs,videos,and computer games at the top of adult fiction books On the right side also
a Add a missing verb
is also
room
for children's books near adult non-fiction books. At the centre portion of the library
there a 2 tables and 16 chairs near the entrance. Furthermore
, on the right side of the entrance
there is an enquiry desk Add a comma
entrance,
room
and on the left side
there is a reading Add a comma
side,
room
.
But nowadays, there are many changes
in the central library
but the main is the indication of room
setting changes
like the installed computers in the replacement of reading rooms and also
making a tea room
for the people in the area of the enquiry desk. Moreover
, they removed the chairs and tables from the centre of the library
. Everything in the library
changes
without entrance and is the same in both.
In conclusion, recently big changes
came in the library
from the past like a computer room
, cafe, lecture room
also
a tables and chair setting area.Submitted by khastafojiii on
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