The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's corree and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the
hapits
of people who buy or drink Correct your spelling
habits
coffee
and tea in five different Australian cities over the last
week.
Overall
, citizins
who went to a cafe' for Correct your spelling
citizens
coffee
or tea, had the highest persentage
in all the cities except for Correct your spelling
percentage
Adelaide
for the last
4 weeks. Although
, people who Correct word choice
However
brought
fresh Correct your spelling
bought
coffee
had the least
Correct word choice
lowest
percent
, Replace the word
percentage
while
individuals who bought instant coffee
were in between.
In Hobart, Sydney and Melbourne the persentage
of people who went to a cafe' were just above 60 Correct your spelling
percentage
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
in Brisban and Adelaide
, they where
around 55 Correct your spelling
were
percent
and 40 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
respectively. The percentage of citizens who bought instant Change the spelling
per cent
coffee
in the last
4 weeks were
around 42 Change the verb form
was
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
both
Sydney and Melbourne, while
they reached around 33 percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
both
Brisban and Adelaide
, Moreover
, they reached just below 40 percent
in Hobart.
Individuals who bought instant Change the spelling
per cent
coffee
in both
Hobart and Brisban were around 53 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
in Adelaide
they reached up to 50 percent
,and they were below 50 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
both
Sydney and Melbourne.Submitted by hazarbakhit on
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