The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The given map illustrates sports
courts
in a university in the year 1990 and at the present time.
It is clear that
over the period, the sports courts
have been completely transformed with the addition of a basketball court
and a fitness centre. Additionally
, the map witnesses an increased number of tennis
courts
as well as
the replacement of indoor pool
at present.
The most noticeable additions are the basketball and Fix the agreement mistake
pools
tennis
court
. A basketball Fix the agreement mistake
courts
court
has been built in the northwest, which replaces the park in the same position in 1990. The car park disappeared completely and a tennis
court
is
built Wrong verb form
was
instead
in the southwest.
The cafe and the reception are the ones that remain unchanged, which are located in the centre among the the
Remove the redundancy
apply
courts
. The changing room seems to be expanded longer which is located right next to a fitness center. The fitness center
, which is in the southeast, is a new Change the spelling
centre
replacemant
for the Correct your spelling
replacement
tennis
court
. As you can see from the map, an indoor pool has been built in the northeast in replacement of the outdoor one.Submitted by kelsey.aston.aie on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, court, tennis with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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