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The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The given map illustrates sports
courts
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 in a university in the year 1990 and at the present time.
It is clear that
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 over the period, the sports
courts
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 have been completely transformed with the addition of a basketball
court
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 and a fitness centre.
Additionally
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, the map witnesses an increased number of
tennis
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courts
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as well as
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 the replacement of indoor
pool
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pools
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 at present. The most noticeable additions are the basketball and
tennis
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court
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courts
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. A basketball
court
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 has been built in the northwest, which replaces the park in the same position in 1990. The car park disappeared completely and a
tennis
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court
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is
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was
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 built
instead
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 in the southwest. The cafe and the reception are the ones that remain unchanged, which are located in the centre among the
the
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courts
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. The changing room seems to be expanded longer which is located right next to a fitness center. The fitness
center
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, which is in the southeast, is a new
replacemant
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replacement
 for the
tennis
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court
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. As you can see from the map, an indoor pool has been built in the northeast in replacement of the outdoor one.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, court, tennis with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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