Nowadays many young people are going to other countries for their future. What are the reasons for it? How it will be in 30 years?

In the present, many

youth

are willing to go to other countries to search for their luck,

such

as

career

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a career

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or

education

. One of

possible

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reasons why

this

trend can

be happen

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because their original

country

can not provide what the

youth's

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youth

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needs,

such

as job fields. I predict that 30 years later,

this

thing will significantly increase. I will elaborate

it

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below. First

thing

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first,

people

go to study or work abroad because their first

country

could not give

what

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them what

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the young

people'

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people

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needs

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need

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.

For example

, in my own

country

, in

Indonesia

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Indonesia,

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it is very hard to find a job that

linked

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with our major or qualification. So,

people

at

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apply

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here decided to search

jobs

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for jobs

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from

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in

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another

country

. Not only that

,

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but

also

the quality of

education

in Indonesia is not really that good. To pursue a good quality of higher

education

, they tend to apply for

scholarship

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.

Therefore

, they can get a better

education

.

In other words

, the role of the

country

itself is really important for

youth

whether

theywill

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they will

have

career

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a career

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in their

country

or in another state. Based on

this

explanation. I believe that

people

will

more

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be more

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and more interested to out

from

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of

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their

country

for their future.

This

is

due to

people

think

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thinking

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if they are going to another

country

, there will be a lot of opportunity to take. To illustrate, they can have a job that

linear

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with their capabilities. By

this

, they can gain higher incomes. So that,

people

will more engage to going abroad.

To conclude

,

inability

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the inability

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of a

country

to

fulfill

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fulfil

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their

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its

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citizen's needs make young

people

want to leave their

country

. They are eager to

looking

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look

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for a better life in other countries. Because of that, in the future, it is inevitable that the number of

people

are

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apply

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going abroad

more

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will be

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high

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. But, as long as the government of the

country

can take responsibility

to

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this

, it is still possible to make

youth

to

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stay in the

country

.