The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of
British
immgrants
in five different countries from 2004 to 2007 .
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immigrants
Overall
, it is evident that,
in the year 2006 the most popular destination for the Remove the comma
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British
was Australia, Whereas
the least was New Zealand.
at first glance , it is obvious that a significant majority of British
individuals preferred to emigrate to Australia in 2006 comprising just over half of the population .Additionally
, the number of British
people moving to Australia started at just over 40% in 2004 and increasing
to around 45% in 2007.
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increased
Moreover
, the percentage of Britsh
communities moving Correct your spelling
British
oversea
to Spain declined steadily from just below 35% in the beginning to nearly 30 per cent.
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overseas
On the other hand
, The USA shows pattern
of fluctuation Add an article
a pattern
the pattern
throughtout
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throughout
However
, France experienced a massive resurgence to the high point of about 33% in the year 2005. before receding to just under 20% in 2007 .Submitted by helpme on
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