The graph below shows the proportion of four different material that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the percentage of 4 selected materials used for recycling between 1982 and 2010 in a specific country.
Overall
, paper & cardboard and glass containers flactuated
throughout the given period, Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
fluctuates
however
the figure for aluminium cans rocketed remarkably. Add a comma
however,
On the other hand
, plastics experienced a minimal uplift.
It is clear that
,
paper & cardboard represented the largest percentage Remove the comma
apply
of
about 65% in 1982, whilst glass containers started at 50%, after which they witnessed just the same Change preposition
apply
downwards
trend until 1990, levelling off at approximately 65% and 40%, respectively. Change the word
downward
Next,
both go up slightly. This
is followed by a
different trends, an upward for containers made of glass,Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
a
downward for paper.
Correct word choice
and a
Furthermore
, cans made of aluminium and plastic in
the beginning of the period Change the preposition
at
standed
at the same level, but the former took off dramatically, Correct your spelling
stood
while
the latter maintained the same level with only a small growth.Submitted by kamelaltynai on
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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