the charts below show the number of japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australians share of the japanese tourist market.

the charts below show the number of japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australians share of the japanese tourist market.
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A glance at the provided figures depicts the
number
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of individuals from Japan who travelled to other countries from 1985 to 1995.
In addition
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, a given line chart demonstrates the
number
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of
Japanese
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that went to Australia during
this
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period.
Overall
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, the highest
number
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of
Japanese
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travelling occurred in 1995,so approximately
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million
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Japanese
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took a trip in 1995. In stark contrast, the lowest amount of trips took place in 1985 mere 4.3
million
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Japanese
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. The
number
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of
Japanese
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tourists increased steadily from 4.3
million
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tourists to 11
million
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in 1990 and interestingly the
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of
Japanese
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tourists followed a similar trend from 1992 to 1995.
However
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, it can be seen
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in the highlighted
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between 1990 and 1992. The percentage of
Japanese
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who selected Australia as a destination of their travel witnessed a constant increase from a negligible 2 % to 4.8 % in 1988. After the mentioned year,
this
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statistic experienced a drop to 4%.
Furthermore
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, the indicated
Japanese
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number
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reached
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a apeak
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apeak
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a peak
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of over 6% in 1993.
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