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The map shows the changes of Stockford city in 1986 and now. Summarize all the information in the picture and give comparison.

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The two maps illustrate the development of
Stockford
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City
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 in 1986 and the present map of the
city
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. The North East area of
Stockford
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City
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 used to have a primary school, paddy field, and bridge. Nowadays the primary school has expanded and has been renovated into a bigger school, the bridge is still the same as in 1986, and the farmland has been demolished into an empty space. The South East area of
Stockford
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City
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 used to have a large house and gardens. Nowadays large houses and gardens have been developed into retirement houses.
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, the South West used to have farmland and river stock. Nowadays the farmland has been replaced with a shop along the river stock. For the river stock there had been a development into houses. In conclusion, most of the area of
Stockford
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city
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 has experienced a great alteration, especially in providing more housing and shopping centres.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words stockford, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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