The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a
city
hospital's
road
approach between 2007 and 2010. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the three biggest changes were made to the
city
hospital vehicle access. These include the building of a new roundabout, new parking facilities and renovated a new
bus
stand. In 2007, there was a hospital in the north, and around the hospital, there was a
road
called Ring
Roadroad
Correct your spelling
Road road
, where there was a combined car parking for individuals and hospital employees of the
city
hospitals next to
bus
stops on the hospital
road
.
In addition
, the
city
road
was situated at the bottom of the map. As far as the plan of 2010 was concerned, the
city
road
and the hospital roads were converted into two roundabouts in the midpoints and south respectively. On the southwest, former
bus
stops had been renovated into a new
bus
stand. On the right bottom side of the map, the parking area had been separated as the parking area was reduced for hospital employees and a new vehicle place had been established for the individuals on the northwest side of the hospital.
Lastly
, the location of the
city
hospital remained the same.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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