The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The layout shows three possible sites for a leisure centre.
The first
site
A, is located near an industrial factory plant which is next to a river and the main road
. It is not an ideal position because of the toxic gases released by the plant. Plant B is located near a residential area with the main road
next to it. It is an ideal location because it is next to the residential complex. The last
site
, C is in the middle of a forest which does not make it ideal as it neither connected to the main road
nor it is near the residential complex.
To conclude
, site
B is the most ideal location for building a leisure centre as it is next to the residential complex which makes it easily accessible and because it is free from pollution. Furthermore
, site
B is connected to the main road
which makes it accessible to other cities that are nearby.Submitted by satyarthverma88 on
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