The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the consumption of fast
food
such
as Pizza
, Hamburgers as well as
Fish
and Chips
by Australian
teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear that
the first choice of fast food
among Australian
young people was Hamburger then
Pizza
as a second option, whereas
Fish
and Chips
had
Verb problem
were
last
desired among teenagers at that time.
First of all, the number of adult children who had eaten Hamburgers was increased sharply from approximately 10% in 1975 to 100% per year which considered the highest rate in the consumption of fast food
. In addition
, Australian
teenagers attended to bought Pizza
a lot . The ratio of eaten Pizza
was
increased dramatically to reach over 80% in 1995 and it unchanged after five Unnecessary verb
apply
years
. In the last
line which is called Fish
and Chips
. It had a fluctuated change during the given years
. To elaborate more, young Australian
citizens were admired to eat
fast Change preposition
for eating
food
such
as s Fish
and Chips
in 1975 with
100 per cent, but after 5 Change preposition
at
years
the rate dropped quickly then
its
grew Change the pronoun
it
the
next 5 Change preposition
in the
years
. To sum up
, the time eating Fish
and Chips
in years
1985 to 2000 significantly decreased from under 100% to 39% ( respectively).Correct article usage
the years
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, such".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, pizza, fish, chips, australian, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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