In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that students

study

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in

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a university

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in their

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, someone view is that get knowledge abroad more beneficial. It is undeniable that

study

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has become an essential part of our life.

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there is no absolute agreement as some people find learning overseas beneficial,

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others consider everything associated with foreign states negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to schooling in another

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but I believe

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outweigh

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. One of the main positives of

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study

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in another

city

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is that a new education. For

inctance

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instance

, abroad countries there

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lot of information than they

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before from which there will be great benefit. One of the main causes of students

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to

study

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abroad is that the university diploma

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valued and can be hired for any job. Another

advantages

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is that a new relationship, more

frinds

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friends

than before. A good example here is you can go there at any time and they can

also

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help with the place where they will live, help with the language to find something. Turning to the other side of the argument,

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can

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a lot of time to the adaptations in that recipe,

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a

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with

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people,

due to

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the fact that they have different

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, interesting things and plans,

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may miss family and close friends Having

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everything mentioned

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, we can come to the conclusion that

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study

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in other countries with other nation more beneficial than

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study

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studying

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in the

city

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where live.