The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of

Brandfield.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The map demonstrates two locations in the
city
of Brandfield where a shopping mall can be built choosing either of them.
Overall
, the two locations are surrounded by some crucial infrastructures and both are near the
city
centre.
Moreover
, a railway covers the whole area from the southeastern to the northwestern
side
making the commute easy. On the one hand, 1st site is located near the housing estate which is on the northern
side
of the map, surrounded by rivers, roads and railways on each
side
of the location.
Moreover
, the
city
centre golf course and park are
also
nearby, giving more advantages to the site.
On the other hand
, the 2nd location is in the opposite direction of the 1st location, situated on the southeast
side
of the map, close to the industrial estate, dividing them by a railway.
Additionally
, the
city
centre is
also
close by which
also
gives it the same advantage as site 1.
However
, the housing estate, golf course and park are far from here, making it less appealing to the locals.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • shopping mall
  • city center
  • suburbs
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • environmental considerations
  • infrastructure
  • urban planning
  • development
  • consumer behavior
  • green spaces
  • residential area
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