The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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There is a map comparing some changes in the

library

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in five

years

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. Through the five

years

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, it can be seen that there are no differences in the entrance area.

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, the Librarian's desk and the stairs remain the same. The map shows that there were 8 small tables in the middle of the

library

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five

years

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ago. Now, it can be seen that there are 4 longer tables in the same spot. It can be said that there are many differences between the book sections. There were only three sections, which are self-help, history and fiction on the left. The new

library

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has more sections including the old one. Kitchen, economics, and law are the new categories added in 5

years

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, on the north side, there is an area for the children with some books for their ages. Before the renovation, newspapers and periodicals were on the right side of the

library

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. After that, they were digitalised and became films and DVDs.

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, with

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technological development, some computers were added to the

library

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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, years with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

176 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

comparison
significant changes
modernize
technological facilities
computer stations
digital book borrowing
interactive learning
family-friendly spaces
cafe or lounge area
social interaction
open spaces
flexible seating arrangements
collaborative work
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