The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar graph presents the number of residents who lived in Iceland from 1990 to 2020 and divided into five different
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of age. As can be seen from the bar chart, people from 25-54 had an upward trend,
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the
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between 0-24 showed a downward trend.
However
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, the two older
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did not have obvious fluctuations. It is evident that the
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aged 25-54 was the only
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that had growth, rising from around 31% to its peak at almost 50% in 10 years.
On the contrary
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, the number of people between 15-24 fell gradually from above 20% to a low of about 7%.
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, the
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between 0-14 declined slowly from 25% to 18%.
On the other hand
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, the percentages for another two older
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remained comparatively steady throughout the period, both
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stayed around 10% to 15%. We can conclude from the bar graph that the birth rate declined and Iceland was gaining more working-age population.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words groups, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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