Students should have physical activity as a compulsory subject at school on a regular basis. Why is it beneficial for students to participate in physical activity? Which sports do you think are the safest physical activity?

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that physical

activity

should be a mandatory part of

school

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curriculum and students must practice it on a regular basis. In

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essay, I will explain the importance of physical

activityand

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activity and

show the positive impact on our students. The

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results gave strong

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for the

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between

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physical

activity

with the growth and development, which will be maintained by improving their physical

activity

during the school period.

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can be seen

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the body shape and strength

as a result

of

practicing

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sport

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and physical activities.

In addition

, their social skills and communication ability will be enhanced.

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,

thestudents

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the students

who do not

practicing

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and

not

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involved in

a

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physical

activity

, their health and growth will be affected

while

they are growing up. Each physical

activity

has its own rules that must

to

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be known to select the kind of

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activity

with safety precautions.

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sports

in

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younger ages will improve their social skills and

communications

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.

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, the self-

activity

that helps to build his or her own personality that enables them to observe and measure the level of development. So, we will give attention

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the physical

activity

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activities we choose in

this

critical period. In conclusion, the importance of these activities might make a huge difference

on

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our student’s life. In my opinion, the positive impact

for

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this

process

are

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well-known and must be encouraged to be a basic part

in

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student’s life.