The graph below shows the proprotion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2024 in three different countries.
The illustration presents the
porportion
of the Correct your spelling
proportion
population
aged 65 and over from 1940 and the estimation for 2040 in three different countries.
Overall
, every country has an increasing rate of elderly people every year. The percentages at the beginning and end no
more than 25 years apart. Each country's percentage increase Add a missing verb
are no
repidly
in the 2030s.
From 1940 to 1980, the Correct your spelling
rapidly
USA
and Sweden
had a significant increase rate of elderly people, accounting for 10 to 15 percent
and 8 to 14 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
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per cent
in
order. In 2000, the Change preposition
apply
USA
percentage has been
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rise
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percent
in 2040. In 2000, Change the spelling
per cent
Sweden
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Sweden's
population
remains relatively high but stable, slightly above the USA
. In 2020, the population
begins to increase more noticeably, refecting
an Correct your spelling
reflecting
aging
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ageing
population
. In 2040, Sweden
's elderly population
countries to rise
, though at a slower pace compared to Japan
, indicating ongoing demographic aging
but not as rapidly as in Change the spelling
ageing
japan
. In 2000, Capitalize word
Japan
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experiences
a significant Wrong verb form
experienced
rise
, supassing
both Correct your spelling
surpassing
Sweden
and the USA
where the population
remain
relatively stable. In 2020, Wrong verb form
remained
Japan
elderly Change noun form
Japan's
percent
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USA
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