You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The map illustrates the
city
called Pellington which has a 120000 population. Three suggested areas for a new supermarket can be also
seen on the map. Those areas are marked with letters A, B, and C respectively.
The first one is near the centre of the figure. This
area is on the north side
of the railway, and the north-west side
of the traffic-free zone and the park. Moreover
, it is also
on the residential site.
The second one is on the north-east side
of the map, and there is a motorway to the west of it. This
site is in the countryside of the city
.
The third one is also
in the countryside and it is on the south side
of the city
. On the west, there is an airport which is also
in the countryside.
It can be seen another city
called Hampford signed with an arrow. It has 30000 population and is 15 km away from Pellington. The nearest proposed area for a supermarket to Hampford is A.Submitted by bloodylady on
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