The chart below shows information about calorie consumption in seven countries in 1975 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average
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calorie
consumption in seven countries including United
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the United
States
, India, New Zealand, Somalia, China, Spain and Indonesia, in 2003.
Overall
, the United States
has the highest average calorie
consumption, while
Indonesia, which had less than half the average calorie
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States
and New Zealand, had the lowest average calorie
consumption of all eight countries.
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, consuming nearly 3400 calories, had the highest average, and just after that, New Zealand was in second place by 3300 calories while
The other six countries were consuming significantly fewer calories.Submitted by wongmingwai29 on
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