The maps show the layout of a coal mine and its improved layout after redevelopment to become a visitor attraction.

The maps show the layout of a coal mine and its improved layout after redevelopment to become a visitor attraction.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps show the layout of a coal mine and its improved layout after redevelopment to become a visitor attraction.
The provided maps illustrate a coal mining site and its renewed version as an entertainment destination.
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, it can be clearly seen that the layout was completely reformed and upgraded. Except for the parking for vehicles, all amenities changed, and there were two new constructions, a playground for juveniles and a walking path. One apparent change was the use of most buildings.
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two rooms for staff at the northwest corner of the map turned into a museum, the medical centre was reconstructed into a café. On the opposite side of the café and the museum, two past waste pits transformed into a driving circuit and picnic area. The other striking changes were the newly constructed, contemporary children’s playground and footpath located in the southwest corner of the map.
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some circumstances, Lorry Park was demolished and the footpath was constructed ,
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instead
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of the second waste pit on the opposite side of the picnic area constructed area for recreational purposes, mainly for young juveniles.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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