You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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provided diagram illustrates the process by which carbonated
drinks
are produced.
Overall
, it can be seen that the manufacturing process comprises five distinct stages to turn raw materials into carbonated
drinks
. The production starts with
water
cleaning and ends with packaging the end products. Looking at the diagram in more detail,
to begin
with, the raw
water
is directed into a filter to remove impurities, and
then
using the chemicals in the
water
softener, the purified
water
can be softened. In the following stage, softened
water
is pumped into an electric heater for evaporation, and cooled in the cooling pipelines. Afterwards, it comes to the stage where cooled vapours and carbon dioxide are mixed to obtain the carbonated
water
. The third stage involves the
further
mixing of carbonated
water
, colouring, syrup, and flavour, making it more appealing to the customers.
Subsequently
, carbonated
drinks
go through the second filter and are utilized to fill numerous bottles and cans.
Finally
, these bottles and cans filled with carbonated
drinks
are packaged and delivered to the supermarket for sale.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words drinks, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbonated drinks
  • water cleaning
  • heating evaporation
  • carbonation
  • mixing tank
  • filtering
  • filling
  • packaging
  • raw water
  • filtration
  • softening
  • chemical treatment
  • heating
  • evaporated
  • carbon dioxide
  • coloring
  • sweeteners
  • flavorings
  • final beverage
  • impurities
  • bottles and cans
  • distributed
  • supermarkets
  • stores
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