The provided line chart depicts the rate of citizens living in urban spaces of four countries in Asia over the course of 70 years, beginning from 1970

The provided line chart depicts the

rate

of citizens living in urban spaces of four countries in Asia over the course of 70

years

, beginning from 1970, with the estimation of growth from 2030 to 2040. Generally, it can be seen obviously that all the four mentioned nations have an upward trend in terms of urbanization

rate

.

While

the number of individuals staying in urban areas in Malaysia experiences a significant growth,

this

proportion in Thailand illustrates the least rise compared to

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three countries. To be more specific, the urban

rate

of Malaysia fluctuated between

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first and

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second place between 1970 through 1990,

then

taking the lead in the year 2000 and being forecasted

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in

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first place until the end of the aforementioned period.

Besides

, the Philippines showed the same trend

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Malaysia in the first 20

years

, but slightly went down in the next 20

years

and rose gradually until 2040. Regarding

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Indonesia

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, despite having the smallest

rate

of urbanization in the beginning,

this

rate

had a positive change,

rocketting

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rocketing

by nearly 40

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in 2020 and being expected to climb up to over 60 in the next 20

years

.

On the other hand

, the urban

rate

proportion of Thailand evidenced development but not remarkable, making

this

country rank fourth place and having a modest percentage of over 40 in the end.