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The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.

The table below shows daily oil production in 4 countries from 2000 to 2004.
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The table provides a detailed overview of
oil
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production
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, highlighting the growth of the
oil
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 industry in four nations between 2000 and 2004.
Overall
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, Congo was almost the leading
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 producer among the four countries, including Nigeria, Chad, and Somalia, throughout the four-year period starting in 2000. Notably, Chad experienced significant growth in its
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 industry during
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 time.
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 the amount of
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production
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 in Congo in 2000 was the highest, with 275,000
tonnes
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 manufactured, its output gradually decreased over time, reaching 203,000
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 in 2004.
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,
oil
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production
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 in Nigeria fluctuated between 205,000 and 210,000 from 2000 to 2004.
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, by 2004, Nigeria's output had surpassed that of Congo, with 213,000
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 produced. Notably, Chad did not engage in
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 exploitation between 2000 and 2003.
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, it began
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production
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 in 2003, producing 8,000
tonnes
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, which increased dramatically to 50,000 in 2004.
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, Somalia's output in 2000 only stood at 5,000
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, which rose considerably over time and peaked at 50,000 in 2004.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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