Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmentalproblems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are some individuals who argue that the most important environmental problem of the century is the extinction of

animals

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and

plants

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,

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others believe that the priority of other environmental problems

such

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as global warming and

deforestation

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is higher. On the one hand, if the number of

animals

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and

plants

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decrease

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, it could have a negative impact on food and medicine. There is a food cycle in the world of

animals

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and

plants

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and if the cycle is

distrupted

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disrupted

by a foreign force,

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can change the number of

animals

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and

plants

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dependent on that species which can lead to a change in our diet eventually. Another point is that

,

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scientists discover many vaccines in animal bodies by studying them. There is a chance that some life-saving vaccines

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in the bodies of endangered

animals

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which can benefit

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humanity.

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, I believe that solving other environmental

crisis

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crises

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can

sovle

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solve

these

probelms

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problems

too.

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, paying attention to other environmental problems like global warming and

deforestation

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can save not only the lives of humans

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but

also

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animals

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and

plant

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plants

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. The activities of humankind which

releases

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release

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CO2 emissions into the atmosphere

enhances

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global warming which can increase the chance of natural disasters happening more frequently.

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,

deforestation

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can kill

animals

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and

plants

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. Many loggers cut trees to expand the area

which

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people live, not knowing that they are changing the habitat of

animals

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though

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.

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,

this

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can make

animals

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intrude on other

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animals

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animals'

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territory and create casualties

among

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between

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the two groups. In conclusion,

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the reduction in the number of

animals

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and

plants

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is a concerning environmental problem, I believe that the consequences of global warming and

deforestation

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cannot be ignored which can take the lives of humans,

animals

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and

plants

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.