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The charts below illustrate the market share of different smartphone brands in Russia and the amount imports that occurred in three consecutive years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below illustrate the market share of different smartphone brands in Russia and the amount imports that occurred in three consecutive years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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table and pie charts give information about the market distribution of cellphone brands and the sum of imported
smartphones
 in 2020, 2021 and 2022 in Russia.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the portion of
Iphones
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iPhones
 among the population has increased over the period, and the quota of
Samsung
 phones decreased. Considering the statistics in 2020,
the
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all
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quantity of imported
smartphones
 composed
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 343
million
 units,
and
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35
percent
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 belongs to
Iphones
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iPhones
, and the other 34
percent
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 is for
Samsung
.
Furthermore
,
the
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other brands like Google Pixel,
OnePlus
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 got almost 16 and 12
percent
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 of all market
share
, respectively; and,
moreover
, the other brand’s smartphone
share
 was 3
percent
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 of all
smartphones
. In regards to 2021,
in
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this
 year Apple and Google Pixel
phone’s
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 distribution increased to 40 and 29
percent
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, correspondingly.
in
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 Russia,
although
Samsung
 and OnePlus quota in
marketplace
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the marketplace
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 saw
decreased
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,being distributed by the former brand
21
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percent
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per cent
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 and the latter’s
share
 composed 9
percent
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per cent
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.
Therefore
, the classification of Other got only 1
percent
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 of all
smartphones
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, and the number of imported
smartphones
 was 670
million
. In terms of 2022, the amount of
smartphones
 bought from abroad has decreased to 430
million
 phones. And the pie chart of market
share
 showed a significant portion of
Iphones
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iPhones
 (45%), Google Pixel (23%) and
Samsung
 (19%).
Furthermore
, about 43
million
 phones were from OnePlus, and 12,900 thousand were from other brands.
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