The charts below show the residential water use in 1988 and 2008
The pie charts below illustrate the use of residential water by proportion in 1988 and 2008.
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, exactly half of the figures increased and 3 figures decreased. In 1988 kitchen got the lowest Linking Words
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Garden in 1988 was the fifth one by Linking Words
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Toilets had just above Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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