The charts below show the residential water use in 1988 and 2008

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The pie charts below illustrate the use of residential water by proportion in 1988 and 2008.

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, exactly half of the figures increased and 3 figures decreased. In 1988 kitchen got the lowest

percentage

while

in 2008

this

index was the leader. Garden in 1988 was the fifth one by

percantage

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percentage

however

, it fell dramatically and had 7

percentage

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, which gave

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him

last

place in 2008. The kitchen rose approximately

twised

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twisted

. More precisely

this

figure

had

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percentage

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in 1988

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and analogically had

few

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than 30

percentage

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. Washing decreased slightly, just by 3

percentage

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. In 1988

this

figure had one of the quarter. Toilets had just above

one fifth

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in 1988. In 2008

this

index slightly decreased to 4

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and was the second looser

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2008. The

last

figure bathroom, had 22

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in 1988. And slightly increased, and was the second leader in 2008 with 28

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The charts below show the residential water use in 1988 and 2008

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