The pie chart below show the makeup of the congress in country X after Election Day. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
The graph illustrates information about country
X
Change noun form
X's
congress
makeup after Election Day.
Overall
, it is apparent from the figure that the Prosperity party
makes the largest fraction of the congress
whereas
Unaffiliated individuals make the least. Moreover
, both the Propress party
and the Unity party
accounts around close to each other.
To regard with The Prosperity party
, they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
consist
of 36 per cent making them the top Correct subject-verb agreement
consists
party
in the
Correct article usage
apply
congress
. Likewise
, Propress and Unity parties makes
33% collectively, with 24% and 19% Change the verb form
make
to
each, respectively.
Turning to the lowest percentages in the Change preposition
for
congress
, which are the Liberty party
with 14% and after it come the Unaffiliated party
with a percentage of 7%.Submitted by remasalotaibi678 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words congress, party with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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