The pie charts show energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030

The pie charts compare the sources of Australia in 2008 and expectations for 2030.

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the

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of gas and oil

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incresed

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increased

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,coal will

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in the future. As the charts show,the main energy

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was coal at 39,00% in 2008,

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the smallest was hydro at 0.20%.

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,the

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of solar was as twice high at 0.80%

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wind

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at 0.30%.

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of the gas was just 22.90% and oil had approximately the same per cent at 32.50%.The other sources were at 4.30%.Turning to the energy

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of 2030,the

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of coal is predicted to

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22.30 %

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oils will be at around 35.50%.The forecast shows that

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the quantity of gas will be 32.00% and 0.70% for hydro.It is estimated the

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of geothermal and others will stay at the same

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4.30%,respectively.By 2030,the

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of wind will be at around 0.90%.