Your Friend wants to send his/her children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say: - Agree to this arrangement - Say what time is suitable for you - Describe what are you planning to do

Hi Sam, I am very delighted that you have decided to drop your
kids
at my house for
this
weekend. I am very excited to see them as I haven't seen them
from
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for
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last
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the last
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four months. My
kids
, Sim and Kiara, are very happy to meet their friends. It would really be great if you could drop them
by
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off by
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10:00 am on Saturday as I am planning to take
kids
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the kids
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to watch the movie at Silvercity and
show
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the show
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is starting at 11:30 am.
However
, if you could not drop her by
then
just let me know beforehand so that I can come to pick her up myself. I have decided to take them to the recreation center afterwards as it is at 10 minutes drive from the theatre. I am sure
kids
would have lot of fun together. I wish you all the best for your meeting and don't worry about the little ones. We will get to hang ouot once you are back from your meeting. See you soon. Lots of Love, Jennifer.
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grammar
There are a few minor grammatical errors and typos that slightly affect the flow. For example, it should be 'I haven't seen them for the last four months' instead of 'I haven't seen them from last four months.' Double-check for such small errors.
structure
Consider structuring your letter into more clearly defined paragraphs to enhance readability. For instance, you could separate the parts where you agree to the arrangement, describe the schedule, and detail the activities planned.
task achievement
You have effectively expressed your willingness to host the children and provided a clear schedule and plan for the weekend.
tone
The tone of the letter is very friendly and appropriate, which is crucial for maintaining a good relationship with the recipient.
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