A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.
Good afternoon, dear sir/madam. I hope
this
letter finds you well.
At the beginning of the letter, let me, please, express to you my sincere delight in your club. It's the best gym I have ever been.
I'm writing this
letter with the purpose of understanding the reasons for the club's closure and finding a possible solution. Otherwise
, your gym closure would have many consequences for our neighbourhood.
First of all, you have to know, that your groups for toddlers, children, and teens, make us, the parents, really happy. On the one hand, our children have plenty of physical activity, on the other hand
, it gives them a social connection. Moreover
, they are so happy with their friends, that they want to participate in your groups instead
of wasting their time with gadgets.
So, if your decision has no private root, we'll be happy to know how can we help you to keep your club open. We have a lot of power in our regional consul office.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best regards, Anastassia.Submitted by anastasia on
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You might want to provide more specific suggestions on how the community can help keep the club open, such as organizing a fundraising event or petition. This would show a proactive approach.
coherence cohesion
Consider separating the points about children's physical and social benefits into different paragraphs. This will make your argument clearer and more compelling.
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The tone of your letter is both respectful and persuasive, which is ideal for this type of request.
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You have effectively expressed your personal concern as well as the collective concern of other parents in the neighborhood.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.
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