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A friend has written to you ask you how your IELTS studies are going . write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test . Informal letter -Say what progress you are making : Improving grammar , vocabulary , written skills -Explain how you are preparing for the test : join 3 week crash course -Say which section you are finding difficult : writing

#friend #ielts #studies #test #-say #progress #grammar #vocabulary #skills #-explain #week #crash #course #section
Dear Annie, I hope you are doing well. I'
m
 just writing to let you know that I'
m
 preparing for the IELTS test through
online
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 course. Well! My major weaknesses are grammar , vocabulary and the letter task
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in writing. I'
m
 improving my grammar day by day ,eventually getting
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 band score.
However
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 two areas, I need some time to be
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 in that .
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, I've enrolled in
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week
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 crash course which includes a few mock tests
at the end
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 all the strategies in order to achieve a
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 band score. As you know , there are four modules in the IELTS test : speaking, writing, reading and
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listening but I'
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 facing difficulties in the writing module. Sometimes,I find
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m
 doing better as compared to the
begining
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. Thanks for asking me about
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 hope for the best . Best wishes, Roopkamal Kaur.
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grammar
Try to use a variety of sentence structures to make your writing more engaging. This will help improve your grammar and vocabulary, which you mentioned you are working on.
proofreading
Be sure to proofread your writing for minor errors in punctuation and capitalization. Improving these small details can make a big difference in your overall score.
tone
Your tone is informal and friendly, which is perfect for a letter to a friend. Great job!
content
Including specific details about your preparation and the support from your instructor makes your response complete and informative.
structure
The greeting and closing are well done, providing a friendly and natural flow to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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