You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation office at the college. In the letter, •Describe the situation •Explain your problem and why it is difficult to work •Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my
annoyant
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annoyance
that
my Change preposition
with
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roomates
. My room number is 609, which is located on Correct your spelling
roommates
sixth
floor and near by lifts. I have two Change the article
the sixth
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roomates witih
me, Correct your spelling
roommates with
we
are Correct word choice
and we
diffrent
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different
subject
, they are both Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
study
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studying
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a master
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master's
of
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am work
hard to finish my Change the verb form
am working
thesies
, so Correct your spelling
thesis
that
I have to wake up quite early and start to write my theory in the early morning. Correct word choice
apply
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, I am writing my books very late as well. But my Correct your spelling
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roomates
are unhappy with my lifetable, because they are freshmanCorrect your spelling
roommates
,
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apply
that
they always wake up late and come back to Correct word choice
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their room
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rooms
everyday
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start
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routine day
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always
slepping
. We have tried to Correct your spelling
sleeping
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solving
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lifetable. After Correct your spelling
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opposite
couple
of days, my Change the article
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roommates
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back
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life again. Now, we Correct your spelling
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both Unnecessary verb
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agreed
with
change Change preposition
to
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roomates
as soon as Correct your spelling
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. So if you would Correct your spelling
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kind
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, it Correct your spelling
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would be
a
best thing to do for us.
Yours sincerely
By EvelynChange the article
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task achievement
Work on spelling and grammatical accuracy to improve clarity and readability.
coherence and cohesion
Develop a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for each main point.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task and provided a complete response.
suitable writing tone
Polite and respectful tone is maintained throughout the letter.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.