The first chart bellow shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart bellow shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first pie chart illustrates how
energy
is spent on the average budget in Australia. The second one displays the carbon dioxide
gas
produced
that is
caused by spending
energy
.
Overall
, the two biggest proportions of
energy
usage
are occurred
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by heating and
water
heating, whilst the two main sources of greenhouse
gas
emissions result from
water
heating and other appliances.
According to
the first figure, heating has the most households with 42% and it is followed by
water
heating with 30%. The
least
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last
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two
energy
usages result from cooling and
lightingwith
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lighting with
2% and 4% respectively,
while
refrigeration has 7% of the budget. The second graph shows that
water
heating and other appliances are the most carbon dioxide producers with 60% in total. Heating and refrigeration processes cause greenhouse
gas
emissions of almost the same amount 15% and 14% respectively. The least toxic
gas
is produced by cooling with only 3%.
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