The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph compares how
sugar
has been produced from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, Linking Words
that is
important that the Linking Words
sugar
process has 7 different stages which start from farms and end with Use synonyms
sugar
powder.
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According to
the picture, at the start, Linking Words
sugar
cane, which is the main plant that Use synonyms
sugar
comes from, needs to spend between 12 to 18 months to grow; Use synonyms
then
either farmers or agriculture machines harvest them and send these ingredients to the factory.
The diagram illustrates that in the factory the plant should pass 5 steps to become the material that we need; Linking Words
as a result
, they pass crushing, which changes Linking Words
sugar
cane to the liquid whose name is juice. At the next level, the purifying juice, juice flows into the limestone filter for refining; Use synonyms
thereafter
, Linking Words
this
liquid goes to the evaporator for altered into a syrup after that, Linking Words
this
element is the combination of not only a syrup but Linking Words
also
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sugar
crystals, so centrifuge device separate these parts from each other. Later syrup in drying and cooling alternative become Use synonyms
sugar
powder.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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