Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is sad that
music
could play as a connecting bridge between individuals with distinctive age groups and cultural backgrounds. However
, some people
see music
as an only entertaining tool. I completely agree with the former opinion
Music
is a universal language which we are born with. As a result
, every human being already can communicate with the notes immediately after they are born. We could acknowledge this
in the reaction of any newborn baby to a lullaby. Moreover
, our first tool to communicate with our parents also
is musical crying. For instance
, many experts believe we can find out the newborns’ requests based on their crying tones. This
means we are familiar with music
from the beginning of our life journey. This
gives us the opportunity to make contact with any other person around the globe without knowing their mother tongue.
Music
notes affect us psychologically. This
means they can change our brain’s biochemical functions. For example
, many studies confirmed the role of music
in the management of people
with psychological disorders. In addition
, Surprisingly, musical notes from different cultures act similarly
on humans and show the same effects. Studies also
showed when a song hits the public every age group and people
from different ethnicities generally have a positive reaction to it. For example
, we can see this
universal acceptance of hit songs like Celendions’.
In conclusion, although
there is a minority of people
who follow music
just in terms of entertainment, we biologically and by instinct comprehend music
and utilize it to communicate with our kind and even other species.Submitted by drmmdi on
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