he chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025 according to United Nations statistics.

he chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1975 to 2025 according to United Nations statistics.
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The graph illustrates data about how many births and deaths occurred in Switzerland based on the figures from the UN between 1975 to 2020.
Overall
,
although
the figure for births experienced a dramatic rise, despite remaining stable at the beginning, the number of deaths decreased, considering a peak, over the fifty years. It is noticeable that
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the greatest difference in the number of births and deaths happened in 2025. From 1975 to 1995, the figure for newborns rose gradually from 1.3 to 1.7
million
, despite staying constant at 1.3
million
in the first decade, but the rate of
death
saw a decrease from one to 1.5
million
.
Furthermore
, in 1985, the difference between birth and
death
is in the lowest numbers nearly 1.3. In the years 1995 to 2020, the statistics of birth jumped from 1.7 to over 2.5
million
, growing gradually to 3.3 in two decades later
similarly
the rate of
death
has fallen to 75 thousand people in 2020. The highest statistics for
death
and the lowest figure for birth accounted for 0.75 and 3.3
million
in the
last
year, respectively.
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