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The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne,Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne,Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 line chart illustrates the proportion of
indeviduals
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individuals
, who
contrebute
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contribute
contributed
by
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to
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 four activities at
social
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a social
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 center in
melbuorne
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in
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apply
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Australia during twenty years.
Overall
, as
it
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shown from the graph
that
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the Film club
was
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 the highest activity,
while
 the musical performance
was
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had
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 the least, until the beginning of 2015, the
Amateur
dramatics
 activity became the least among them.
According to
 the line chart,
at
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 the first 4 years, both the table tennis and
Amateur
dramatics
 activities witnessed an increase in the number of
participants
, reaching approximately 20 and 29
participants
, respectively in 2005.
On the other hand
, Martial arts and Film club activities decreased. Music activity did not appear in the first 4 years.In 2010 both
Amateur
dramatics
 and Table tennis met at
same
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the same
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 rate by 20
person
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people
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whereas
 Musical performance
also
 increased to around 10.The year 2010 was the
last
 year of decline for
Film
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the Film
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 club
near
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with
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 by 60
participants
. There was a sharp increase in Table tennis from 2010 to 2020 with 50
participants
,
however
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however,
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Amateur
dramatics
decline
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declined
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 sharply
around
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to around
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 5 person
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amateur, dramatics, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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