The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of
visitors
to art galleries in various countries Use synonyms
such
as ( France, The US, The UK, Korea, Spain, and Russia) in the year Linking Words
of
2011. The quantity is measured in millions.
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apply
It is clear that
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,
Louver Remove the comma
apply
Museum
located in France had the largest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
compared to the other galleries, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Russian
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the Russian
gallery
had a low rate of Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
visitors
.
The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
to the Louver Use synonyms
Museum
was just under nine Use synonyms
million
by 2011. Metropolitan Use synonyms
Museum
in the American United States had six Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
visitors
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the Linking Words
number
of people who visited the British Use synonyms
Museum
Use synonyms
had
the same rate that Verb problem
was
the
Metropolitan Change preposition
of the
Museum
.
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In contrast
, the National Linking Words
Museum
of Korea and the Museo de Prado Gallery in Spain had an equal Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
visitors
at three Use synonyms
million
. State Hermitage which is a Use synonyms
russian
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Russian
museum
was just under three Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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