The graph shows the number of visitors to a variety of art galleries in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and repo fling the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the amount of
visitors
to art galleries in various countries such
as ( France, The US, The UK, Korea, Spain, and Russia) in the year of
2011. The quantity is measured in millions.
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Museum
located in France had the largest number
of visitors
compared to the other galleries, while
Russian
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the Russian
gallery
had a low rate of Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
visitors
.
The number
of visitors
to the Louver Museum
was just under nine million
by 2011. Metropolitan Museum
in the American United States had six million
visitors
. Furthermore
, the number
of people who visited the British Museum
had
the same rate that Verb problem
was
the
Metropolitan Change preposition
of the
Museum
.
In contrast
, the National Museum
of Korea and the Museo de Prado Gallery in Spain had an equal number
of visitors
at three million
. State Hermitage which is a russian
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Russian
museum
was just under three million
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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