The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the United Kingdom between 1970 and 2004

The figure shows that the index

population

of wild birds from 1970-2004 has different

number

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from each other

species

. The

number

of wild birds who still alive

such

as coastal

species

around 140, all

species

around 110, woodland around 90, and

farmland

around 60

species

. Coastal

Species

rising

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dramatically from 1970 to 1986 meanwhile after 1986 to 2024

remind

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remained

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stable.

In

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other

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the other

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hand, Woodland

species

have

positive

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a positive

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trend from 1970 to 1977, but after 1977 to 2004 continually

decrease

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decreased

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.

Therefore

,

Farmland

species

have

positive

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a positive

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trend from 1970 to 1977, and after 1977 to 2004 dramatically

decrease

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decreased

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. Despite of the

number

of coastal

species

is the

most high

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highest

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population

compared to other

species

,

however

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the

number

of coastal

species

are only 20

species

from 1970-2004. Meanwhile, Woodland

spices

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species

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have the higher

number

of

species

with 33

species

in total, even though the

population

is below the standard of other

species

.

In addition

,

Farmland

species

that has

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have

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minimum

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a minimum

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species

with

total

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a total

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19

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of 19

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species

,

also

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and also

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minimum

population

that life endangered.

To sum up

, the

population

of all

species

in

United

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the United

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Kingdom tends to be

Stabil

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stable

from 1970 to 2024.

However

, coastal

species

remind

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remain

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increase

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increased

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each year, and woodland

species

and

farmland

species

decrease.