The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The graphs give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Bart charts illustrate the proportion of individuals who had a
computer
between 2002 and 2010 and the distribution of
computer
ownership
by level of degree in 2002 and 2010.
Overall
, it can clearly seen that every two years
computer
ownership
steadily increased. In 20210 the proportion of
the
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who had a
computer
greater than in 2002.
Additionally
when the level of education getting higher
computer
education raised up as well.
While
in 2002 the percentage of
computer
ownership
was just below 60% and it increased nearly to 80%. It can be observed that when people had better education device
ownership
gap between 2002 and 2010 decreased. Individuals without high school diplomas used computers more than 40% in 2010, which is nearly three times more when compared with in 2002. High school graduates nearly doubled their
computer
ownership
ratio in 8 years. College students increased from 60% to nearly 90% from 2002 to 2010. For the people with bachelor's degrees and postgraduate qualifications
computer
usage difference is less than 20%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • population demographics
  • educational attainment
  • disparities
  • technological advancement
  • digital divide
  • market penetration
  • socio-economic factors
  • predictive insights
  • statistical significance
  • longitudinal study
  • accessibility
  • affordability
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