The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays the data of
Woodsville
and
Blacksboro
the average amount of
rainfall
by
inches
in a whole year from January to December. It is obvious that the
overall
rainfall
patterns are similar between these
two
cities. Spring and winter are
two
seasons when there is much more
rainfall
than in the summer and autumn.
However
, the annual sum of the average
rainfall
of
Woodsville
is much higher than that of
Blacksboro
. It is shown from the table that the month with the highest
inches
of
rainfall
in
Woodsville
is November, which is 6
inches
deep. The counterpart in
Blacksboro
is January, but only half as high as that in
Woodsville
.
Although
in July the
two
cities both have the lowest units of
rainfall
which are under 1
inches
, the figure for
Woodsville
still has a lead. It should be noticed that in each month the average
rainfall
of
Woodsville
is higher than that of
Blacksboro
except in February when the
two
cities have the same quantity.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words woodsville, blacksboro, rainfall, inches, two with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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