The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays the data of
Woodsville
and Blacksboro
the average amount of rainfall
by inches
in a whole year from January to December.
It is obvious that the overall
rainfall
patterns are similar between these two
cities. Spring and winter are two
seasons when there is much more rainfall
than in the summer and autumn. However
, the annual sum of the average rainfall
of Woodsville
is much higher than that of Blacksboro
.
It is shown from the table that the month with the highest inches
of rainfall
in Woodsville
is November, which is 6 inches
deep. The counterpart in Blacksboro
is January, but only half as high as that in Woodsville
. Although
in July the two
cities both have the lowest units of rainfall
which are under 1 inches
, the figure for Woodsville
still has a lead.
It should be noticed that in each month the average rainfall
of Woodsville
is higher than that of Blacksboro
except in February when the two
cities have the same quantity.Submitted by micilan on
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