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The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the average monthly rainfall in two different cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays the data of
Woodsville
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 and
Blacksboro
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 the average amount of
rainfall
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 by
inches
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 in a whole year from January to December. It is obvious that the
overall
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rainfall
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 patterns are similar between these
two
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 cities. Spring and winter are
two
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 seasons when there is much more
rainfall
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 than in the summer and autumn.
However
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, the annual sum of the average
rainfall
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 of
Woodsville
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 is much higher than that of
Blacksboro
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. It is shown from the table that the month with the highest
inches
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 of
rainfall
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 in
Woodsville
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 is November, which is 6
inches
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 deep. The counterpart in
Blacksboro
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 is January, but only half as high as that in
Woodsville
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.
Although
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 in July the
two
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 cities both have the lowest units of
rainfall
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 which are under 1
inches
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, the figure for
Woodsville
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 still has a lead. It should be noticed that in each month the average
rainfall
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 of
Woodsville
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 is higher than that of
Blacksboro
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 except in February when the
two
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 cities have the same quantity.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words woodsville, blacksboro, rainfall, inches, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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